- king
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Join date : 2022-01-28
Bridegroom married at a funeral.
Thu Feb 03, 2022 3:01 pm
Fangs extract red gore
Bullet skims the werewolf's pelt
These costumes our play
Black turtle neck black trench coat
Bridegroom's wholeness made complete
This is a tanka whereas a haiku is 5,7, then 5 syllables. A tanka is 5,7,5 then 7 and 7 syllables.
Bullet skims the werewolf's pelt
These costumes our play
Black turtle neck black trench coat
Bridegroom's wholeness made complete
This is a tanka whereas a haiku is 5,7, then 5 syllables. A tanka is 5,7,5 then 7 and 7 syllables.
Re: Bridegroom married at a funeral.
Fri Feb 04, 2022 12:29 pm
King, nice!
I like these Japanese styles of expression
I like these Japanese styles of expression
- Rasa
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Join date : 2022-01-27
Re: Bridegroom married at a funeral.
Fri Feb 04, 2022 8:04 pm
I used to be pretty good a Haiku. Never explored the other Japanese forms. They're very zen in their forced simplicity yet can say a heck of a lot in a very few words.
- king
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Join date : 2022-01-28
Re: Bridegroom married at a funeral.
Sun Feb 06, 2022 11:54 am
Thank you. I love these types of poems. It's as if they're a puzzle to figure out. A zen koan in the making.
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